MONSTER in the BASEMENT . . . enter if you dare!

Narrative writing 

Lewis - "I reckon the monster drawing was just brilliant because I said red eyes in my story and I like the way he hat it like a bunny rabbit with sharp teeth and blood dripping."

Josh - "I like the way Paris multicoloured it. Like she drew colours inside colours and the hands were a gun blowing fire."

Hannah - "I like the way Ngor did my monster. It looked like a cute creature and it as full of all sorts of colour."

Daniel - "Liam illustrated it with pencil first and then colour so it looked real good."

Jake - "I think it was funny. Like my drawing has the hands torn off with heaps of blood. It looks really good."

Ngahuia - "I was reading Ngor's but I didn't understand it. I didn't give up and still gave it a go drawing the monster."

Timod - "I like the way I had little description but Faith still drew it exactly how I had imagined it."

Tom - "I had a bit of description and Boston still drew it fat, fluffy and man-eating."

Hi my name is Josh this week at school Miss Tame has been teaching us narrative writing and all of us have been writing about a monster in the basement and after we had written our stories someone drew a picture of our monster and all of the drawings were fabulous .We are very happy to have Miss Tame as our teacher because she  has been letting us use our imagination in narrative writing we also got to draw our monster and we got to change our stories around  so the  other kids in our class got to draw our charters we had to descibe our charters by writing the detials in our writing task we are very happy to learn about narrative writing we will make the best stories ever. We also got to share some of the stories out they were all fantastic we all have had a great time with the narrative writing tasks it has been so much fun.

by Paris and Josh.